My Best Friend Died Essay -- Friendship Essay Personal Narrative

My Best Friend DiedDr. Munters comments The purpose of this assignment was to relate an event that changed the direction of your life. Not only does this student successfully accomplish this task, he does it with a certain amount of understatement. The instruction to show, not tell is beautifully and subtly completed. There is also a nice balance of long and mulct sentences, unusual similes, and the sense that the author allows the reader to view this event through the eyes of an eight-year-old. Overall, the writing is clean, simple in technique, yet powerful in its message. I remember the van. It was the gray of dry clay, and it had maroon stripes on the sides that were the same color as maple leaves during the fall, but it was winter now. It was my moms van, and I was riding in the guts seat. I was eight years old, and she had pulled over on the side of the road because she had some sad news to tell me. My legs didnt touch the ground. They just dangled with my sorrels slightly to fall off. I was all bundled up in the puffy winter clothes that mothers dress their chi...